I was in the patio under the Sun's soliloquy trying to focus on the haunt of heat on skin, an effort to recall uniqueness (or forceful forget of indifference?) Diatribelly positioned at the liminal post of human pelt to discern whether perception pure accrues virtue sufficient to persist after the buoyant dispersal of the skin and the nether kin under its veil Under the noon Summer Sun a shadow butterfly dissolves in flower shades Adamic naming of Paradise, had he known it as inventory of lack or, ere Noah, life's ark, would Paradise that can be lost not be flood? In the tiles a squirming ant, maybe maimed, rolled back and forth from the Pain of the hyper-heated surface Toil supreme is to appreciate the Sun, integument of death, once lost Paradise is Perfect.


This actually made me think of one of my favorite poems by Dean Young . Always a genuine treat to read these
Benno! This is awesome. Makes me think of those hot days spent of the patio simply letting my skin tan.
I liked the ending there. It makes me think that to really enjoy what is going on death is not hovering over the occasion - as it is want to do.
Hope all is good!