Incredible rhythm and musicality to this one. Flows in such a blissful way, like you know the the words that follow each line, without needing to read any further!
Benno! I loved, "No decrease / in his solemn gait," The sun as walking down over the horizon is not something I have heard. It's usually the movement of the heavens or some such. This was awesome! Thank you for sharing!
Incredible rhythm and musicality to this one. Flows in such a blissful way, like you know the the words that follow each line, without needing to read any further!
Rasmus, that’s beautiful praise! Very grateful 🙏
Goodness, you must have been possessed by an the ancestral spirit of Gaia or something. This was so beautiful. I love it all!
Haha XD Not sure about Gaia, but definitely some mead, so maybe some kindred spirit? Thanks a lot Ricardo =)
The ~flow~ is beautiful
Thanks Madeline! 🙏
Benno! I loved, "No decrease / in his solemn gait," The sun as walking down over the horizon is not something I have heard. It's usually the movement of the heavens or some such. This was awesome! Thank you for sharing!
Thanks Martin! I'm glad that line resonated so in giving some character to the sun! Happy solstice!
Nice.
Thanks!
Beautiful prose to follow the path of the sun. You are amazing, Benno!
Aww, thanks! Thank you Rea for the warmth and kindness =)!
Lovely as always Benno. That drop in the second last line and the rising feeling I put from the last line was breathtaking
Much appreciated Blace! I was really happy to read your comment because I was indeed hoping to convery that!
Lovely cadence to match the grace of a falling Sun, really liked this one Benno
Thanks Rob, glad that was able to shine through! Happy solstice!
Happy solstice!!
Love the way the text falls like the sun beneath the horizon!
Thank you! It was something I hoped should show!