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Ramona Moth's avatar

the wordplay & the way the form mirrors the feeling is so satisfying. “I like the rain / but the sun in me / is like the I in identity” so good.

Benno's avatar

Thank you Ramona! I’m glad those elements blended together well, cause It was bit challenging to see how the wordplay could lead to a deeper pathos 🌻

Ellis Wiens's avatar

Your glyphic paintings complement the graphic elements of the poem so much

Benno's avatar

Thanks Ellis, I guess it’s part of the biomorphic research program! I really want to explore more graphical interplay with calligraphy in the boundaries of the semi-semantical and the natural. But many other good stuff a-coming!

Ellis Wiens's avatar

Lots of quality ingredients to cook with there