time exile
Loverly haunt swell
Benno, your raw and powerful words conjure images and emotions beautifully.
This is really kind Rea! My deepest thanks for the warmth of your comment 🙏!
"and find I AM
boat and ocean,
depth inconmensurable,
see I AM's both
ocean and depth
that which contains
awares and infinites" 🔥👏 Love this line, so cathartic
Thanks Elijah! Cathartic is a great compliment!
I like that your use of sandpaper as a verb automatically transmits such grisly imagery. And the jigsaw skin hugged by water? Very crafty contrast!
Thank you Ellis! Indeed the physicallity I was searching for
Loverly haunt swell
Benno, your raw and powerful words conjure images and emotions beautifully.
This is really kind Rea! My deepest thanks for the warmth of your comment 🙏!
"and find I AM
boat and ocean,
depth inconmensurable,
see I AM's both
ocean and depth
that which contains
awares and infinites" 🔥👏 Love this line, so cathartic
Thanks Elijah! Cathartic is a great compliment!
I like that your use of sandpaper as a verb automatically transmits such grisly imagery. And the jigsaw skin hugged by water? Very crafty contrast!
Thank you Ellis! Indeed the physicallity I was searching for