Triptych
I will leave only a comment of silence. Nice one.
🙏:)
"nothing exceeds silence" wow Benno!
A lot of strong images and ambiguous emotions shining through these Words!
Great job, now I am gonna go read it again:)
Deeply appreciated Rasmus! Thanks for reading!
The kind of poem that makes me feel the potency of existence. I really liked the triptych structure combined with the heavy imagery, like taking in a painting. Well done, keep at it!
“The potency of existence”, wow, what a compliment! Thanks a lot for the encouragement Ellis!
For sure, man. It's absolutely your best poem that I've read so far (just came back to read it again).
Killer last line!
Thank you Elijah!!
I love the intricate way you use words to weave magic, Benno!
Thank you Rea, that’s a lovely commentary to receive, magic is indeed what I strive to.
I will leave only a comment of silence. Nice one.
🙏:)
"nothing exceeds silence" wow Benno!
A lot of strong images and ambiguous emotions shining through these Words!
Great job, now I am gonna go read it again:)
Deeply appreciated Rasmus! Thanks for reading!
The kind of poem that makes me feel the potency of existence. I really liked the triptych structure combined with the heavy imagery, like taking in a painting. Well done, keep at it!
“The potency of existence”, wow, what a compliment! Thanks a lot for the encouragement Ellis!
For sure, man. It's absolutely your best poem that I've read so far (just came back to read it again).
Killer last line!
Thank you Elijah!!
I love the intricate way you use words to weave magic, Benno!
Thank you Rea, that’s a lovely commentary to receive, magic is indeed what I strive to.